itay390's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Up Step!]

could've been so better

that music idea had potential! its really bad that you blown it away and instead "made something up" in 30 minutes. the piano was good, the drums were good, the guitar needs a little tweaking , more in the bass, less scratchy (time to get a new plugins?) if only you could spend a little more on this music it would've been better, such as changing the music sometimes (especially the piano) and stuff like that.

[Miniature Lullaby]

lol funny song

i liked the melody itself, but the implentation of the idea was a bit.. unbalanced and repetitive
good points :
*this song is very calm except some points and i like it :)
*the idea of the melody was very good but the only lack is constructing the music based on that idea.
bad points :
*near the end its beginning to mess up, and the volume changes to be too high
*few instruments sound very bad in high velocities, like an annoying horn
*in 00:41 seconds you could've change the whole music to a higher tone and contiune the melody from there - that would be much more nicer than what you did, which means cutting the song and bring it to a lower tone.

another point : in your other songs you sing and it kinda.. broke up your songs because its not a good idea to sing unless you have a voice of a singer

triangleshower responds:

i'm not really sure of the reason for the "few instruments sound very bad at high velocities" thing.
its a slow song.

[<Battle Line and Charge - CH1>]

Great music, too bad its short

the music sounds very good, and i suggest you try to sell some of your musics, because this music really suits the style of a military RTS.

the melody on the second part is very good, i liked the inviduality of each instrument and the support of all the orchestral at some points.

some points which bothered me:
*the song doesn't really have a start point
*it is a little boring at start, few reasons for this :
maybe because i don't sense any progress there maybe because of repeats of patterns
maybe because there is no clear melody in there

[to the future conan]

in the last review..

i meant for messenger email

BlackPlastic responds:

You could have just PMed me.

[FL experiments 001]

if u want..

if you want i can guide you how to make nice sounds in FL, talk to me at [e-mail] - btw i just registered on this site and some song of mine should arrive here soon.. after it gets validated

BlackPlastic responds:

To help me find it when you do please create a profile.