could've been so better
that music idea had potential! its really bad that you blown it away and instead "made something up" in 30 minutes. the piano was good, the drums were good, the guitar needs a little tweaking , more in the bass, less scratchy (time to get a new plugins?) if only you could spend a little more on this music it would've been better, such as changing the music sometimes (especially the piano) and stuff like that.